‘Edenbray in Exile’
A Retrospective Anthology of Poetry, Articles and Essays
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BOTTLE OF POP
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I was the figurehead you were the mailer
When sober men met to discuss the future
Of inspiration that divides without taking sides
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The elegance of women always paves the way for
Pain resolved, leaders panned and scribbled in
Who take a cue from the monkey still in the zoo
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Or write poems that deny us through and through
He saw what I saw and I saw what they saw
The can of garbage and some ever-ripe strawberries
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Dress cleanly in an olive oil cup the weathered salad
So fresh and filled with both ignominy and goldfish-hope
Who bought children’s money and rescued seals
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writtenbyedenbray13.04.2013
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#Authors Note ~ The sixties! – were an unusual time and from where I was standing, living through them was very different to how most people might think. Those who weren’t there that is.
A creative writer has to be bold, experimental, to take risks and sometimes call it wrong, sometimes call it right!
This piece on, the face of it, represents a kind of homily to a beautiful and startling icon of the sixties – fashion model – Jean Shrimpton who is representing that ‘swinging’ time … Jean is the bottle of pop – but the words somehow don’t match the title, the personality of the super-model- doesn’t quite match the character of the piece.
The words are questions and challenges, certainly transcendental if not psychedelic. For me they are down to earth and poignant as opposed to sensational and esoteric. There is a dichotomy and a tension. The subject of the piece is there but merely an onlooker and for me as a written piece the narrator is a wise, surgeon of words who hovers over the era more like a modern-day drone than a far-out reveller. edenbraytoday















EDENBRAY in EXILE – 6 – hydrate
‘Edenbray in Exile’
A Retrospective Anthology of Poetry, Articles and Essays
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hydrate . . .
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inhalate
infiltrate
expatriate
violate
annihilate
pontificate
remonstrate
sublimate
venerate
regenerate
exonerate
exfoliate
hydrate
2◯﹆th⊂ENTURYboy
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writtenbyedenbray05.08.2012
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#Authors Note :- Something a little different today – this piece is definitely from my Prog-prose portfolio – A poem of one-word lines that I wrote 8 years ago but which somehow seems to fit in to today’s scenario as much as it did then and if anything is even more relevant due to the enormous problems we face currently.
I try not to slip into endless or repetitious jargon about or around COVID-19 but you can’t run away from it. The truth is, the world has to wake up! – Today it is sick and humankind has to learn to be healthier and to challenge those who aren’t and who invite potentially unhealthy, lethal or evil (depending on your viewpoint) germs or viruses into ‘our’ Global village!
This piece for me challenges humankind perfectly and without judgement in all of those areas of concern and the issues that the current epidemic has thrown up in all our faces.
Be strong! – edenbraytoday
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