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TO Celebrate the occasion I am re-posting all eleven parts – Today it is BALADINS DREAM ~ Part VI ~ HAPOELLE
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BALADIN’S DREAM
and OTHER TALES
by edenbray
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BALADIN’S DREAM ~ VI
Authors Note ~
I have to acknowledge that this piece probably owes much to fifties filmmaking which I grew up with and great literature like Treasure Island, Gulliver’s Travels etc. It references epics like Moby Dick, Mutiny On The Bounty and other less well-known films of that time, many shot in black and white and shown on our tiny TV screens allowing the magic of cinema to transport post-war Britain to different cultures and circumstances and join in with adventures of excitement and derring-do.
Baladin is once again the central character at another stage of his enormous life and who now recalls his time as a whaler, who found himself briefly ~ a bit like Fletcher Christian ~ catapulted into a world of tropical delights in an acceptance-culture where anything goes as long as it’s love-based. John Lennon would surely have approved. The freedom of this imaginary setting allows for a mildly sensuous and wistful story to unfold in a Utopian society where our moral compass and human values may be challenged.
Baladin, like an earlier, more cultured Forest Gump steps through the pages of early modern history and in this piece reminds us of the origins of much of America’s earliest wealth in more poetic times before global-warming and the industrial excesses of the modern world have made it our central focus.
Hapoelle is basically a slice of harmless descriptive novelette, it is a cracking good tale based around hard-edged facts. Hopefully it is also a bit of fun!
~ edenbraytoday
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BALADIN’S DREAM
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HAPOELLE
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She was the youngest daughter of a Polynesian chieftain
Her soft flesh wore the colour of sun-blushed, dried cinnamon
She could sway her hips like Guava trees in a high wind
Or pandanus which she loved and whose fruit she carried
home to her father, those hairy, hard shells so heavy
Hapoelle’s breasts hung like two mountain apples
All these island girls, capricious, still went semi-naked in 1845
The year Baladin’s boat came to rest on the coral sand dunes
and the ships crew put up, to take comfort in the local nation
Whose manners chipper ~ wore a plaited & flowered
welcome garland!
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And Bellannea, Hapoelle’s friend with bosoms he likened to lilikoi
For they were round, ripe and generous, she slept with John Dray
For all the long while they encamped upon that sunny island
Dray drew pictures of her every day, with a stick of
sketchers’ sanguine
He had bought for a penny in an artist’s shop near the
Kennington Oval in London
Baladins’ fondness for the chieftains maiden served only
To leave him melancholic for a woman he had promised to
back home in Sussex
She of fairer skin and lighter sympathy would not have dallied so
Or made almond eyes at an honest gentleman, half betroth to wife
He was caught now in a honey trap and only drank the
hummingbirds sap
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He rolled with Hapoelle, his native lover and learned to
speak of intimacy with her
While his deeper heart settled on a corner of Albion,
where oak-lined villages wait
A gamble of ‘little lambs’ standing on the wide horizon
in the heat of a July sun
Children watching masted, trawler boats return to this
Britains shore to make her great
Baladin’s eyes heavy, his jaw firm set at the memory of the
pinkest salmon in Britains rivers
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The masters of regret, caught this one failed mission in
an ocean ranger’s eye
Those purple mists of time ~ ragged, bloody and faded,
cannot rob the man that moment
Nor his sight, long in the maze of memory which causes
him to smile and mimic sense
He, recalling the freshness of her breath, the lightness
of her girth and quiver
The many gentle moments and pleasure she loaned him
in that strangest summer
If summer she be when settled on a Polynesian Island
in the years when the whale,
Both giant and gentle, was still birthing a nation at the
heart of the Western Isles
Those morbid midwives who sing wistful tales, arctic
and northern narwhals
Not sperm or humpback that the soulful Baladin,
his captain and his crew knew
Courted, chased and lauded with folk songs of wistful
reason and lament
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Baladin has been riding these waves of histories choices
for more than the years of one hundred and three
His dream has lived through longer than the pale
afternoon of those sunnier days
When those sweetest companions of lust and beauty,
soft sirens in warm, tropic seas
Were moist moments adorned with the heat of young
and ardent pleasure
Yet still worn of a season of pride where captains of the past
salute future’s ambassadors.
written 09.03.2012
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Dostoeedsky
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